Summer
In summer, I can smell the wonderful meat sizzling on the BBQ.
It is as hot as an Australian desert.
I can feel the bright sun shining down on my shoulders.
I can hear the beautiful birds chirping as they fly around the cloudless sky.
I can see some beautiful flowers in my garden.
I can taste the fresh summer air in a little breeze.
The grass is lime green with little dry spots from the burning hot sun.
nice poem Jack keep it up.
ReplyDeletethere are a few materfurs in there and similes.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem Jack.