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Hi Jack. I had a read of your writing and thought that your explanation was very clear. I also like your number steps and some of your detailed steps you have added in your explanation. But I think you might need to go onto your slide 2 and check some of the sentences to make sure that they all make sences. Anais
Jack I loved reading your story and learning how to play pool it was very interesting to read but I think you need to add more descriptive words and interesting words.good job anyway
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Cool Jack i think is a amazing
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I like how you explain how to play pool from Pete
ReplyDeleteJack I loved reading your story and learning how to play pool it was very interesting to read but I think you need to add more descriptive words and interesting words.good job anyway
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