Thursday, June 17, 2021

persuasive writing Hawaiki

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jack I really like how you said Yours sincerely and all off your pictures but I can really think on something that you need to work on WELL DONE JACK.

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  2. Hi Jack I really like all the pictures you put it makes me understand a lot more about what you were writing about, but the writing is a bit small and hard to read. From Jade.

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  3. Hi Jack, I really like the pictures on your slide. Don't be sad because I don't have and feedforward it's because it's so good I can't think of any!

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